Volleyball with Bodie v2

So if you saw the original, you know it sucked lol. I'm not exactly great at drawing Bodie and I was also trying out the marker tool or something. Honestly I suck with all of them; for me, they're all so hard to draw DX

In any case, here's my 2nd attempt at the pic :3 I didn't wanna make it exactly the same so I changed some things up. Didn't know if I should've kept him shirtless though- should I have added his underarmor thing?

I colored this with my new style. I've still got a ways to go but I don't think it came out too bad. Lemme know what you think.

Oh and I didn't write it, but Bodie's kinda going "Oh c'mon; let em play, Emilia" and Emilia's like "Hmm...Fine, but they'd better bring their A game!"

*Edited some things such as Emilia's face and legs, Bodie's face, and some shading